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LOVE Attack !!
posted by (Sep 01, 2009 @ 6:57PM) views: 585
to all readers:
eto na po ang chapter 2. mejo inimprove ko na po yung format! thanks uli sa mga nagsuggest. hope you'll like it.. :]

LOVE Attack !!


..chapter 2..

“ Round One ! ”


( kinabukasan,habang papunta sina gabby at ysa sa canteen )

Gabby: hindi ko talaga expected na magkakaron ako ng karibal. I thought everything will be fine. Hindi pala ! At ang lalo pang nakakainis, he’s a GUY !! Wala kong balak magpatalo sa isang LALAKING katulad niya. Humanda siya sa - - -

Ysa: Oi ! Bakit ka nanggagalaiti jan ?? Ay, wait ! I knew it ! Dahil yan kay Mr. Eng’r no?!

Gabby: Sino pa nga ba !? Kaazar talaga yun !!

Ysa: Naku, friend .. baka naman you’re falling in love with him na..?

Gabby: Nasa tamang pag-iisip ka ba ??


Ysa: Hahaha! I’m just kidding. Ofcourse I know naman na dahil yan sa pagiging - - -

Gabby: STOP !! Kung ano man yang iniisip mo, nagkakamali ka!

Ysa: Hay naku gabby .. napaghahalata ka masyado. Wala pa nga kong sinasabi eh.

Gabby: YSABELLA!?!

Ysa: Ok fine! Cool ka lang. Nawawala ang poise and glamour. *smile

Gabby: Hay naku, eto talagang bestfriend ko. Feeling ko alam na niya lahat ng PINAKAtatago kong sikreto. May hindi - - -

( may biglang nagsalita mula sa audio room [otor’s note: haha! may ganun!? ung audio room po..pauso ko lang yun. Dun po nag-aanounce. Di ko po alam tawag eh. un lang :])

Jake: hello .. hello ? Good afternoon everyone !! Im Jacob Hernandez, your DJ for today! You can also call me “ DJ Jake ” haha! yeah men.

Ysa: Oh no! Gabby..

Gabby: Yes I know, it’s him.

Girls: si JAKE !!? Ahhh!!!! *tili

Jake: I’m here to sing you a song.. I hope you’ll like it.

The strands in your eyes that color them wonderful
Stop me and steal my breath
Emeralds from mountains thrust toward the sky
Never revealing their depth ..”


Gabby: hmp! Hindi naman siya magaling.

Girl1: Gosh !! I can’t believe it! Marunong pala siya kumanta !?

Girl2: Ano pa bang hindi kayang gawin ni Jake? He can do anything !! He’s the man !!

“I'll be your crying shoulder
I'll be your love suicide
and I'll be better when I'm older
I'll be the greatest fan of your life .. “


Girl1: *tili* Grabe! If I know para sa’kin lang niya kinakanta yan..haha!

Gilr2: Asa ka naman!? Hindi ka karapatdapat noh! Sa’kin lang siya.

Ysa: Grr.. !! Nakakarindi naman yung mga tili ng mga babaeng toh! Parang wala ng bukas! Oh no gabby .. naunahan ka niya.

Gabby: Oo nga eh! Kainis talaga! If I knew that he’s going to do this, kanina ko pa dapat ginawa yung plan ko.

Ysa: huh?? What do you mean ? Anong plan?

Gabby: I planned to catch the attention of ALL the students here in the canteen but I’ve changed my mind. I’ll do it kung san MAS maraming tao makakakita sa’kin.

Ysa: Saan??

Gabby: You’ll see!

Ysa: Wow! Exciting..

“Rain falls angry on the tin roof
As we lie awake in my bed
You're my survival, you're my living proof
My love is - - - ”


( biglang tumigil ang pagkanta ni jake )

Girl1: what happened!?

Girl2: naku naman .. ! bakit ngayon pa!? andun na eh!

Gabby: *LOL :]* Ganyan talaga ang nangyayari sa mga taong kinakalaban ako!

Ysa: Oo nga girl.. iba ka talaga! haha!


( after 5 minutes.. nagkasalubong sina jake at gabby )

Gabby: hello! what happened ?? *grin :]* mukhang first round pa lang, TALO ka na! You’re such a L-O-S-E-R!

Jake: Pinagbigyan lang kita noh! You’ll see..may round 2 pa no!
*sabay walk-out

( sasalubungin ni ryan si jake)

Ryan: oh, dude! What happened !?? Bat bigla kang tumigil sa pagkanta ..?

Jake:Hindi ako tumigil. Bigla na lang nawalan ng power ang buong audio room.

Ryan: huh? Pano nangyari yun??

Jake: Ewan ko. Siguro ganun talaga pag minamalas ka.

Ryan: Dude, sa palagay ko di ka minalas.. sinadya tong gawin sa’yo.


Jake: What do you mean?

Ryan: *sabay turo kina ysa at gabby*

( nakita ni jake na ang pagtatawanan ng dalawa.)

Jake: I got it!

~::end of chapter 2::~

kmusta? haha! :]

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perfectworld    •reply Sep 1, 2009 @ 8:46 PM
 
super ikli : c r y : 
HabaaN mo OtOr : c h e e r : 
xcited n ako mag-clash sina Gab at Jake : n a u g h t y : 
  trip143    •reply    Sep-1-09@9:17PM
oi! DOTA player ka din pla! nice..may dotmate n ko :] : g r i n : 
trip143    •reply Sep 1, 2009 @ 9:15 PM
 
haha! sensya. gwa muna ko ng assign sa physics :] : r a z z : 
  itsasecret    •reply    Sep-2-09@8:03PM
Wootwoot. : l o l :  : l o l :  : l o l : 
  trip143    •reply    Sep-3-09@5:36PM
oi !! wag k ng kumontra !! : x  palibhasa kc, d k gumgwa ng mga assign... haha !! : l o l :  (joke lng !!)

suporthan m n lng ako !! ok ?? haha !! : r a z z : 
Eurekasixteen    •reply Sep 2, 2009 @ 4:39 AM
 
Haha.nice 1.!
gemini_20    •reply Sep 2, 2009 @ 8:20 PM
 
ayus naman sya..
: ) 
mas okay na kesa dun sa una..
: r a h r a h : 

update : c h e e r : 
loveu4ever915    •reply Sep 2, 2009 @ 9:43 PM
 
asan ang chap 1? : c r y : 
  trip143    •reply    Sep-3-09@5:39PM
sory kng hindi q nlagyan ng link 'yung chap 1... pki-search n lng... thank u !! : s m i l e : 
lulu_08    •reply Sep 8, 2009 @ 7:46 PM
 
ang ikli! kakabitin,sino ang may sala??????? : r a z z :  better format.congratz! : n a u g h t y : 
lalaladeedah    •reply Oct 8, 2009 @ 12:24 PM
 
ang ikli nga. pero astig : ) 

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