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Only Me
posted by ellehcor21 (Aug 06, 2008 @ 2:23AM) views: 142
I want him to see
I want him to care
I want him to love
The only me

Now that he sees
Now that he cares
Now that he loves
The only me

I made him blue
I made him weep
I made him lose
The only me

Now he is gone
What have i done
Making him leave
The only me


Hi to all! It's my 1st time to write a poem. I need ur criticism but dont be harsh on me.. Thx!
 
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sweet_tooth19    •reply Aug 6, 2008 @ 2:24 AM
 
pers! : c h e e r : 
sweet_tooth19    •reply Aug 6, 2008 @ 2:26 AM
 
nice nmn, only you! : c o o l : 
freedertjosh    •reply Aug 6, 2008 @ 2:26 AM
 
: o k l a n g y a n :  : f i r s t :  Where is he now?
  ellehcor21    •reply    Aug-6-08@2:30AM
he's missin : c r y : 
mitchy_angel08    •reply Aug 6, 2008 @ 2:37 AM
 
awts how sad...

pero cute aman poh eh.. : n a u g h t y : 
blahblah89    •reply Aug 6, 2008 @ 2:40 AM
 
bat nman gnun..?? : c r y :  : c r y :  : c r y : 
mhyne28    •reply Aug 6, 2008 @ 1:17 PM
 
: m e c r y : 
astigingmam    •reply Aug 8, 2008 @ 10:58 PM
 
: s m i l e : 

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