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The Labyrinth of my dream
posted by youngpoet (May 21, 2008 @ 4:01AM) views: 172
i was pushed by my strong feeling to write this poem for the person i love much...

"LABYRINTH"

voice from beyond...
Calling for my name;
yelling, mumbling and Humming...
a voice... familiar to me.

That voice...
that seems like a familiar love song
Are you "all my life or born for you"
I can barely understanD...
"when you say nothing at all"

That voIce...
that penetrates in every singLe veins of mine...
to my sOul...
and eVery labyrinth of my heart.

What a confusing mazE...
that we maY not see each other;
how are we going tO meet?
by heart or by soUl?

Now, I am a prisoner of your voice,
that made my heart and soul a slave.
the labyrinth closed by you...
the password is "I LOVE YOU".


I hope you would appreciate this poem created by my silly imagination and laborious fingers.
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youngpoet    •reply May 21, 2008 @ 4:06 AM
 
to all young poet of the philippines please read this..... : c h e e r : 
kleiokyut010    •reply May 21, 2008 @ 4:11 AM
 
jengliz...


bleeding is the nose!
April_May    •reply May 21, 2008 @ 5:52 AM
 
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bhabie_mahalcoh    •reply May 21, 2008 @ 7:20 AM
 
hmm.. what do those words with "" means?..
i mean.. bkit nkagnun cla?.. ahehe..

wala lng..

saka ba't ganun ung message?

pero mgnda po xa..: b l u s h : 

: c o n g r a t s :  hehe..

nung bnbasa ko may naiimagine akong scenario..
  youngpoet    •reply    May-23-08@2:50AM
thanks.
  bhabie_mahalcoh    •reply    May-23-08@6:00AM
welcome po.

i like it.

the way you put those words together..: i n l u v : 

weeh.
  bhabie_mahalcoh    •reply    May-23-08@5:57AM
mean pla un..

engot sa grammar eh..
bLackrose21    •reply May 21, 2008 @ 8:18 AM
 
very nice..
^_^ you really have the right words
youngpoet    •reply May 23, 2008 @ 2:49 AM
 
in a poem created by me, the message is hides among the words. a cipher for a person in love, decode it, the messages lies to its capitals. start now.....
  midnytlove    •reply    May-23-08@6:59AM
pRang da vinci codE tska nationaL treasuRe.. : g r i n : 
youngpoet    •reply May 23, 2008 @ 7:40 PM
 
sALAMAT PO SA PATULOY nyong pagbabasa sa aking kathang mga tulain. Dahil Dyan patuloy pa po akong lilikha ng mga tula para sa mga pusong nagmahal, nagmamahal,magmamahal, nasaktan, nasasaktan at masasaktan. : b l u s h : 

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