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An Unfinished Hidden Part Of Me
posted by (May 13, 2008 @ 7:05AM) views: 187

*Somewhere inside my very mind.., on the dark hollows beyond my head is a story.., a story that was never been revealed nor heard by anyone....*

Guyz! I want to make a story... i have the story drafted yet needs many names.. Read a part of it....

Ayon sa nakasulat, Isang sanggol ang isisilang upang harangin at magiging tanyag bilang "The Great One" Ang pinakamalakas na Veleda na siyang magdadala sa atin patungo sa liwanag, ang gagabay sa atin sa ating pakikipagsalaran sa sayaw ng dagat, Ang magiging sandalan sa ating pakikipagtunggali... Sa ating paglipad patungo sa Kapayapaan. Siya ang tatanghaling Ang pinakamakapanyarihang Veleda.

"I wouldn't let you die my precious one... No one can harm you and I promise you." Sabi ng babaeng may hawak ng sanggol. Hinalikan niya ang ulo nito habang nakatingin lamang ito sa kanya.

"What is happening Mama?" tanong ng sanggol sa isip niya. Hinahayaan niyang mabasa ito ng kanyang Ina at unti-unti'y nakikita niya sa isip ang mangyayari... Ang nalalapit na paghihiwalay, ang paglutang ng bangka kung saan siya'y ilalagay ng ina...



"You promised?! Why didn't you obey me?! Don't die on me! Please hold on.... I'll take you out... Hold on...Don't leave me...."

"I'm sorry... I broke my promise to you Aliyah...That no matther what happens, I'll be there to protect you and stay by your side... Yet I guess I have no choice... No matter what happens... Please never forget that I love you so much, that you were the only one who taught me the true meaning of it. that it hurts so bad... like it tears up my soul, thinking I wouldn't be able to see your face anymore Aliyah. I hope he would take care of you... And I hope he can keep the promise for me"...


"Xerxes huh?! Not a bad name Master..." Sabi ng lalaking nakatayo sa kanyang harapan... Isang lalaking may mahabang itim na buhok, matataas na teynga, magagandang mata at magandang katawan. Matikas, di matatawarang lakas ang tinataglay.

"From now on, we are ONE... that mark on your chest proves you that. I belong to you and You belong to me Master... Ask and I'll obey."


So what do you think of the spoiler?
 
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Kluss07    •reply May 13, 2008 @ 8:41 AM
 
spoiling. : g r i n : 
insanity41    •reply May 13, 2008 @ 4:10 PM
 
: h m m :  hnd ku xa maintindihan.. bshin ku nlng mea.. ngmmdali p ko ehh : l o l : 
yingying    •reply May 13, 2008 @ 6:47 PM
 
: e s e p :  hmm.. parang moses.. : ? 


different scenes po ba yun?
  Blueangel_Cai    •reply    May-14-08@6:41AM
hindi po... iba po talaga xa
  Blueangel_Cai    •reply    May-14-08@6:42AM
yup iba... iba yong scenes....
_pain_    •reply May 13, 2008 @ 7:22 PM
 
ok lang,,
parang sa mga anime..
: l u v :  i like master..
: l u v : 
anyD    •reply May 14, 2008 @ 7:02 AM
 
english pala toh sis?!

di ako aware
  Blueangel_Cai    •reply    May-15-08@4:01AM
jejeejej... kailangan pa yang i-edit sis... from english to tagalog!
  anyD    •reply    May-15-08@8:06AM
ah tagalog na pala sis.. sige sige.. basta aabangan ko yan : s u g o d : 
kleiokyut010    •reply May 15, 2008 @ 5:19 AM
 
ayuz!...

nyahaha..

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