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Main Forum - Category:Poetry & Short Stories
Forever Goodbye..
posted by (Aug 12, 2004 @ 1:00AM) views: 734
Forever Goodbye


Everything flashed back in my mind; it was like a movie replaying in my memory. I can still remember when I said goodbye to him. He cried, he never said anything, and then he just went away. I was hurt, my tears fall down from my eyes but I need to let him go, I love him. He won’t be happy with me, I can’t hold him forever, and I cannot live with him forever. Then suddenly my eyes were teary and then my tears fell down endlessly and I can’t breathe—I can feel my last heartbeat, my last breath, my last tears my last… I was gone...

I saw them crying beside me and I asked myself why are they crying? Where is he? I can’t see him, my love. Oh, there he is he was with other girl, he is smiling, he is happy. I was getting farther and farther from him. Now I am alone, from the sky I look down to him while I am crying…

He didn’t hear what I had said, he didn’t heard my last words, he didn’t wipe my last bitter weep, he never heard me saying.. “I—love—you—goodbye.”
“We oftentimes hide our feelings to the one we really care about, we don’t know why? But love makes us so unsure, we think about right too much that we forget to show how much we really care till its LATE”

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skye    •reply Aug 12, 2004 @ 12:37 PM
 
did the girl die????.........
  elezien    •reply    Aug-13-04@7:49AM
yup!: ) 
  skye    •reply    Aug-16-04@11:15AM
kakaiyak naman : c r y :  : c r y :  : c r y : 
Ms_Pot    •reply Aug 13, 2004 @ 12:22 AM
 
ayan ka na naman inang!!!!!!!!! hehehe: ) 
trixie888    •reply Aug 14, 2004 @ 10:57 PM
 
Uh oh.... : c r y : 
chrisNniel    •reply Aug 20, 2004 @ 8:50 AM
 
HOW SAD : c r y :  : c r y :  : c r y : 
jumacs    •reply Aug 20, 2004 @ 9:01 AM
 
walang hiya nman nang guy>>>>>>>.... :-x :-x :-x dapat sa kanya ibaon ng buhay! : c h e e r :  : c h e e r :  : c h e e r : 
mgaile    •reply Aug 28, 2004 @ 8:34 AM
 
ang sad... namatay ba yung babae? : (  : c r y :  : (  : c r y :  : (  : c r y :  : (  : c r y :  : c r y :  : (  : c r y : 
kiks    •reply Sep 10, 2004 @ 8:00 PM
 
sana yung guy na lang namatay.. : l o l : 
: l o l :  : l o l :  : n a u g h t y :  : n a u g h t y : 
megumi524    •reply Dec 17, 2004 @ 8:45 AM
 
bakit ganon??? : ?  : ? 
leah05_ff14    •reply Mar 24, 2006 @ 7:19 AM
 
Nice... : r a z z : 
pissedoFF    •reply Oct 30, 2006 @ 6:32 AM
 
we think about right too much that we forget to show how much we really care till its LATE”

: c r y :  : c r y :  : c r y :  : s a d : 
Blueangel_Cai    •reply Oct 30, 2006 @ 6:36 AM
 
kaawa.awang nilalang........ : s a d :  : s a d :  : c r y : 
procastination    •reply Jun 4, 2007 @ 10:21 AM
 
LAST : a w a r d : 



: r a s t a n a n a : 
0_0 groovy!!! yeah baybee yeah!!!
deneali    •reply Feb 20, 2010 @ 4:22 PM
 
: m e c r y : 

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