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Main Forum - Category:Poetry & Short Stories
Priceless Tears
Priceless Tears *** I'll cry still for what makes me laugh and not by your attempts to throw me off this boat, I thought was enough for two Now that we're heading for a fall I may dive or should you, but still everything goes straight to bottom I look at you and try to understand your tears, are not for me... They should not be for me... We paddle, used to handling our ways by our mere arms, without doubts The waves take us nearer to the edge. Neither of us thought we couldn't steer it right all the way. Down. It just had to be this time-- the end that I realized why I must cry for you. You were the first. It should hurt bad. The crash had been worse but I was here for you and you did the same to me Maybe for that, I can let you see me broken, weak and helpless. Maybe for that, I want to see you happy, better and contented. But after all this it takes more than just falling down to stick out with me until the end. It takes more than just falling in love to see me cry these priceless tears ever again... Never again. Priceless Tears ..:.::Conclusions::.:.. Share this post (facebook, email, twitter, etc) at pagpapalain ka ng husto.
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wahhh iyak nmn ako dun nakakrelate ako!!!
nadirismyutopia
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Apr-20-07@9:23AM
i strongly believe some things just have to end. parang all good things come to an end... nelly furtado!
i like the last phrase
"never again" parang emphasized maxado...
nadirismyutopia
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Apr-20-07@8:26AM
it was supposedly a poem for a friend kaso hindi ko natantsa yung content, lumabas para pala sa akin to... although i have to admit, i've never been in a relationship. since... God knows when?
nadirismyutopia
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Apr-20-07@9:21AM
ok. siguro affected lan pero nothin serious yet. you're not bad with words yourself.
chic_elleon
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Apr-21-07@1:09AM
hoy benjamin. yan yun ah hehe. haha. nako naman. tagal tagal naman.. wuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu..
nakakatamad na.. ayoko na nag ganito!!!! 
chic_elleon
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Apr-21-07@1:10AM
di ko pa rin maintindihan.. hmmm.. haay nako.. ano ba tema ng tula mong ito??
_X
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Apr-21-07@4:21AM
nadir: thanks! haha, im sure kaya mo ian! ask lang... about ba to sa on and off? ask lang.. hehe
chic: hi po...
nadirismyutopia
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Apr-21-07@5:23AM
basta 1st heartbreak ganun... naimagine ko lang yan.. wuhuhuhu... kasi naman diba supposedly para sau to? ewan ko ba kung ba't nagkaganito ito... nagaambisyon na naman akong meron akong lovelife.
chic_elleon
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Apr-21-07@6:09AM
baliw ka talaga benjamin! di pa nga kami close noh. nambati lang eh
 oist kala ko ba nasa bible study ka ah?? bat ol ka kaw ah!!!
_X
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Apr-21-07@7:28AM
chic: hi rin po
nadir: ah, 1st heartbreak? haha uu nga, close na kami ni chic... chic (uli): pwede frends?
chic_elleon
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Apr-21-07@7:34AM
hihi. otey lang po X..
batet pala X code name mu dito? depressingly inspired. depressingly in love.
nadirismyutopia
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Apr-21-07@8:47AM
_X: uu, palagi akong may first heartbreak! haha... ah buti naman close na kayo ni chic, wag ka lang masyadong dumikit jan ha... me pagkapraning kasi yan eh... palibhasa in-luv...
chic: ewan ko sayo!  hehe, nalulungkot ako ngayon. bigla lang to!
_X
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Apr-21-07@10:07PM
nadir: haha palagi? awww... hmm.. the right time will come, right???
chic: x kasi para maremind ka ng past at maging hopeful ka sa future... hehe, de, bday ko lang po 'yan... 10 = X
chic_elleon
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Apr-21-07@10:42PM
X: ah hehe edi pareho pala tayo. 10 din birthday ko eh haha.
benj: nu naman yun? bakit ewan mu sakin ha  haay nako. anu bat ka naman malungkot. oh kala ko ba tutulungan mo ako sa title dun sa isa kong poem depressingly inspired. depressingly in love.
chic_elleon
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Apr-22-07@8:15AM
X: march po akin hehe.
benj: bleh!!! depressingly inspired. depressingly in love.
nadirismyutopia
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Apr-22-07@8:27AM
_X: ako din sep!
chic: kala ko ba out ka na? super lover chic!!! haha
chic_elleon
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Apr-22-07@8:31AM
benj: uu nga out na ako sa ym. nagsusulat kasi ako ngayon. may bago akong notebook yay!!! at guess what?? kulay purple siya. isa pang YAY!!! hehe. kaya ganadong-ganado ako.
ayoko na kasi mangyari yung dati. nareformat pc namin, lahat ng files ko nawala. kaya mas maganda na ang ganito. atsaka anyway, magkikita kami bukas eh hehe. hmm. gusto ko lang ipakita sa kanya. haay. depressingly inspired. depressingly in love.
chic_elleon
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Apr-22-07@8:53AM
haha. nasa second to the last na poem ko na yung sinusulat ko so after this ako'y sleep na..
kaw? puyatero ka talaga! hehe depressingly inspired. depressingly in love.
chic_elleon
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Apr-22-07@5:59PM
anu naman nagustuhan mo sa term kong puyatero hehe. o ayan new terms learned ka na naman sakin wahahaha. uki uki.
 depressingly inspired. depressingly in love.
nadirismyutopia
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Apr-23-07@9:58AM
ngaun ku lang narinig! haha. pag nakita kita sa YM critic mode ka ha.
i love this one.
i'm starting to have this feeling that i know you, but i don't know you well enough or good enough. maybe we should be friends more. haha.
nice post...
its really hard for those things tho... but its harder to cope up... well pa-commercial ng aking post... hehehe http://www.tristancafe.com/forum/104167#c3385796 :: leave a comment You need to be logged-in order to post comments.Still do not have an account? Register for free
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